Merge pull request #473 from jack9603301/master

nat66: T2518: Modify configuration command use case

1 files changed, 51 insertions, 39 deletions

diff --git a/docs/configuration/nat/nat66.rst b/docs/configuration/nat/nat66.rst
index bcf5570f..c5a8dec0 100644
--- a/docs/configuration/nat/nat66.rst
+++ b/docs/configuration/nat/nat66.rst
@@ -4,11 +4,12 @@
 NAT66(NPTv6)
 ############
 
-:abbr:`NPTv6 (IPv6-to-IPv6 Network Prefix Translation)` is an address translation technology based
-on IPv6 networks, used to convert an IPv6 address prefix in an IPv6 message into another IPv6
-address prefix. We call this address translation method NAT66. Devices that support the NAT66
-function are called NAT66 devices, which can provide NAT66 source and destination address
-translation functions.
+:abbr:`NPTv6 (IPv6-to-IPv6 Network Prefix Translation)` is an address 
+translation technology basedon IPv6 networks, used to convert an IPv6 
+address prefix in an IPv6 message into another IPv6address prefix. 
+We call this address translation method NAT66. Devices that support the NAT66
+function are called NAT66 devices, which can provide NAT66 source
+and destination address translation functions.
 
 Overview
 ========
@@ -21,36 +22,45 @@ Different NAT Types
 SNAT66
 ^^^^^^
 
-:abbr:`SNPTv6 (Source IPv6-to-IPv6 Network Prefix Translation)` The conversion function is mainly used in
-the following scenarios:
-
-* A single internal network and external network. Use the NAT66 device to connect a single internal
-  network and public network, and the hosts in the internal network use IPv6 address prefixes that
-  only support routing within the local range. When a host in the internal network accesses the
-  external network, the source IPv6 address prefix in the message will be converted into a
-  global unicast IPv6 address prefix by the NAT66 device.
-* Redundancy and load sharing. There are multiple NAT66 devices at the edge of an IPv6 network
-  to another IPv6 network. The path through the NAT66 device to another IPv6 network forms an
-  equivalent route, and traffic can be load-shared on these NAT66 devices. In this case, you
-  can configure the same source address translation rules on these NAT66 devices, so that any
-  NAT66 device can handle IPv6 traffic between different sites.
-* Multi-homed. In a multi-homed network environment, the NAT66 device connects to an
-  internal network and simultaneously connects to different external networks. Address
-  translation can be configured on each external network side interface of the NAT66
-  device to convert the same internal network address into different external network
-  addresses, and realize the mapping of the same internal address to multiple external addresses.
+:abbr:`SNPTv6 (Source IPv6-to-IPv6 Network Prefix Translation)` The conversion
+function is mainly used in the following scenarios:
+
+* A single internal network and external network. Use the NAT66 device to 
+  connect a single internal network and public network, and the hosts in 
+  the internal network use IPv6 address prefixes that only support 
+  routing within the local range. When a host in the internal network
+  accesses the external network, the source IPv6 address prefix in 
+  the message will be converted into a global unicast IPv6 address 
+  prefix by the NAT66 device.
+* Redundancy and load sharing. There are multiple NAT66 devices at the edge
+  of an IPv6 network to another IPv6 network. The path through the NAT66 
+  device to another IPv6 network forms an equivalent route, and traffic 
+  can be load-shared on these NAT66 devices. In this case, you 
+  can configure the same source address translation rules on these 
+  NAT66 devices, so that any NAT66 device can handle IPv6 traffic between 
+  different sites.
+* Multi-homed. In a multi-homed network environment, the NAT66 device 
+  connects to an internal network and simultaneously connects to 
+  different external networks. Address translation can be configured 
+  on each external network side interface of the NAT66 device to 
+  convert the same internal network address into different external
+  network addresses, and realize the mapping of the same internal 
+  address to multiple external addresses.
 
 .. _destination-nat66:
 
 DNAT66
 ^^^^^^
 
-The :abbr:`DNPTv6 (Destination IPv6-to-IPv6 Network Prefix Translation)` destination address translation
-function is used in scenarios where the server in the internal network provides services to the external
-network, such as providing Web services or FTP services to the external network. By configuring the mapping
-relationship between the internal server address and the external network address on the external network
-side interface of the NAT66 device, external network users can access the internal network server through
-the designated external network address.
+The :abbr:`DNPTv6 (Destination IPv6-to-IPv6 Network Prefix Translation)` 
+destination address translation function is used in scenarios where the 
+server in the internal network provides services to the external network,
+such as providing Web services or FTP services to the external network. 
+By configuring the mapping relationship between the internal server 
+address and the external network address on the external network 
+side interface of the NAT66 device, external network users can 
+access the internal network server through the designated 
+external network address.
 
 Prefix Conversion
 ------------------
@@ -62,8 +72,8 @@ Every SNAT66 rule has a translation command defined. The prefix defined
 for the translation is the prefix used when the address information in
 a packet is replaced.、
 
-The :ref:`source-nat66` rule replaces the source address of the packet and calculates the
-converted address using the prefix specified in the rule.
+The :ref:`source-nat66` rule replaces the source address of the packet 
+and calculates the converted address using the prefix specified in the rule.
 
 Example:
 
@@ -74,18 +84,19 @@ Example:
 
   set nat66 source rule 1 outbound-interface 'eth0'
   set nat66 source rule 1 source prefix 'fc01::/64'
-  set nat66 source rule 1 translation prefix 'fc00::/64'
+  set nat66 source rule 1 translation address 'fc00::/64'
 
 Destination Prefix
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
-For the :ref:`destination-nat66` rule, the destination address of the packet is
-replaced by the address calculated from the specified address or prefix in the
-`translation address` command
+For the :ref:`destination-nat66` rule, the destination address of
+the packet isreplaced by the address calculated from the specified 
+address or prefix in the `translation address` command
 
 Example:
 
-* Convert the address prefix of a single `fc00::/64` network to `fc01::/64`
+* Convert the address prefix of a single `fc00::/64` network 
+  to `fc01::/64`
 * Input from `eth0` network interface
 
 .. code-block:: none
@@ -97,8 +108,9 @@ Example:
 Configuration Examples
 ======================
 
-Use the following topology to build a nat66 based isolated network between internal
-and external networks (dynamic prefix is not supported):
+Use the following topology to build a nat66 based isolated 
+network between internal and external networks (dynamic prefix is 
+not supported):
 
 .. figure:: /_static/images/vyos_1_4_nat66_simple.png
    :alt: VyOS NAT66 Simple Configure
@@ -114,7 +126,7 @@ R1:
   set nat66 destination rule 1 translation address 'fc01::/64'
   set nat66 source rule 1 outbound-interface 'eth0'
   set nat66 source rule 1 source prefix 'fc01::/64'
-  set nat66 source rule 1 translation prefix 'fc00:470:f1cd:101::/64'
+  set nat66 source rule 1 translation address 'fc00:470:f1cd:101::/64'
 
 R2: