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| author | rebortg <github@ghlr.de> | 2021-06-29 10:39:19 +0200 |
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| committer | rebortg <github@ghlr.de> | 2021-06-29 10:39:19 +0200 |
| commit | 8e100c63014403179a1f8736553ea826c6509c45 (patch) | |
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tunnelbroker: correct spelling and grammar
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diff --git a/docs/configexamples/tunnelbroker-ipv6.rst b/docs/configexamples/tunnelbroker-ipv6.rst index 9317912a..b3f8d5e1 100644 --- a/docs/configexamples/tunnelbroker-ipv6.rst +++ b/docs/configexamples/tunnelbroker-ipv6.rst @@ -1,3 +1,5 @@ +:lastproofread: 2021-06-29 + .. _examples-tunnelbroker-ipv6: .. stop_vyoslinter @@ -6,7 +8,7 @@ Tunnelbroker.net (IPv6) ####################### -This guides walks through the setup of https://www.tunnelbroker.net/ for an +This guide walks through the setup of https://www.tunnelbroker.net/ for an IPv6 Tunnel. Prerequisites @@ -78,12 +80,12 @@ You should now be able to ping something by IPv6 DNS name: 2 packets transmitted, 2 received, 0% packet loss, time 1001ms rtt min/avg/max/mdev = 16.880/17.153/17.426/0.273 ms -Assuming everything works, you can proceed to client configuration +Assuming everything works, you can proceed to the client configuration LAN Configuration ================= -At this point your VyOS install should have full IPv6, but now your LAN devices +At this point, your VyOS install should have full IPv6, but now your LAN devices need access. With Tunnelbroker.net, you have two options: @@ -140,7 +142,7 @@ The format of these addresses: In the above examples, 1,2,ffff are all chosen by you. You can use 1-ffff (1-65535). -So, when your LAN is eth1, your DMZ is eth2, your cameras live on eth3, etc: +So, when your LAN is eth1, your DMZ is eth2, your cameras are on eth3, etc: .. code-block:: none |