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diff --git a/docs/configuration/interfaces/l2tpv3.rst b/docs/configuration/interfaces/l2tpv3.rst index a4b7be36..086cecdf 100644 --- a/docs/configuration/interfaces/l2tpv3.rst +++ b/docs/configuration/interfaces/l2tpv3.rst @@ -1,3 +1,5 @@ +:lastproofread: 2021-06-30 + .. include:: /_include/need_improvement.txt .. _l2tpv3-interface: @@ -9,7 +11,7 @@ L2TPv3 Layer 2 Tunnelling Protocol Version 3 is an IETF standard related to L2TP that can be used as an alternative protocol to :ref:`mpls` for encapsulation of multiprotocol Layer 2 communications traffic over IP networks. Like L2TP, -L2TPv3 provides a pseudo-wire service, but scaled to fit carrier requirements. +L2TPv3 provides a pseudo-wire service but is scaled to fit carrier requirements. L2TPv3 can be regarded as being to MPLS what IP is to ATM: a simplified version of the same concept, with much of the same benefit achieved at a fraction of the @@ -49,13 +51,13 @@ L2TPv3 options set the IP address of the local interface to be used for the tunnel. - This address must be the address of a local interface. May be specified as an - IPv4 address or an IPv6 address. + This address must be the address of a local interface. It may be specified as + an IPv4 address or an IPv6 address. .. cfgcmd:: set interfaces l2tpv3 <interface> remote-ip <address> - Set the IP address of the remote peer. May be specified as an IPv4 address or - an IPv6 address. + Set the IP address of the remote peer. It may be specified as + an IPv4 address or an IPv6 address. .. cfgcmd:: set interfaces l2tpv3 <interface> session-id <id> @@ -65,7 +67,7 @@ L2TPv3 options .. cfgcmd:: set interfaces l2tpv3 <interface> peer-session-id <id> - Set the peer session id, which is a 32-bit integer value assigned to the + Set the peer-session-id, which is a 32-bit integer value assigned to the session by the peer. The value used must match the session_id value being used at the peer. @@ -100,7 +102,7 @@ Over IP tunnel-id 200 } -Inverse configuration has to be applied to the remote side. +The inverse configuration has to be applied to the remote side. Over UDP ======== |