From 9eb90286c0ca7712e1f55812a5affb18facd8293 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: srividya0208 Date: Fri, 30 Jul 2021 07:44:07 -0400 Subject: grammar correction --- docs/commandtree/configmode.rst | 92 +++++++++++++++++++++---------- docs/configuration/interfaces/openvpn.rst | 35 ++++++++---- docs/installation/migrate-from-vyatta.rst | 4 +- 3 files changed, 88 insertions(+), 43 deletions(-) (limited to 'docs') diff --git a/docs/commandtree/configmode.rst b/docs/commandtree/configmode.rst index d4148c22..3e398d5a 100644 --- a/docs/commandtree/configmode.rst +++ b/docs/commandtree/configmode.rst @@ -34,8 +34,10 @@ The ``confirm`` command confirms the prior ``commit-confirm``. Comment ^^^^^^^ -The ``comment`` commands allow you to insert a comment above the current configuration section. -The command cannot be used at the top of the configuration hierarchy, only on subsections. Comments needs to be commited, just like other config changes. +The ``comment`` commands allow you to insert a comment above the current +configuration section. +The command cannot be used at the top of the configuration hierarchy, only on +subsections. Comments need to be commited, just like other config changes. To add a comment to a section, while being already at the proper section level: @@ -84,7 +86,10 @@ The comment would then appear like this: [...] -An important thing to note is that since the comment is added on top of the section, it will not appear if the ``show
`` command is used. With the above example, the ``show interfaces`` command would return starting after the "interfaces {" line, hiding the comment: +An important thing to note is that since the comment is added on top of the +section, it will not appear if the ``show
`` command is used. With the +above example, the ``show interfaces`` command would return starting after the +"interfaces {" line, hiding the comment: .. code-block:: none @@ -102,7 +107,8 @@ To add a comment to the interfaces section from the top: vyos@vyos# comment interfaces "test" -The comment can be added to any node that already exists, even if it's multiple levels lower: +The comment can be added to any node that already exists, even if it's multiple +levels lower: .. code-block:: none @@ -114,10 +120,15 @@ Commit ^^^^^^ The ``commit`` command commits the proposed changes to the configuration file. -Every changes done in the configuration session is only applied when the configuration is committed. To view the changes that will be applied, use the show command. -To discard the changes without committing, use the ``discard`` command. The ``commit`` command doesn't save the configuration, you need to manually use the ``save`` command. +Every changes done in the configuration session is only applied when the +configuration is committed. To view the changes that will be applied, use the +show command. +To discard the changes without committing, use the ``discard`` command. The +``commit`` command doesn't save the configuration, you need to manually use the +``save`` command. -The confirm keyword can be added, see ``commit-confirm``. A comment can be entered, it will appear in the commit log. +The confirm keyword can be added, see ``commit-confirm``. A comment can be +entered, it will appear in the commit log. .. code-block:: none @@ -130,8 +141,10 @@ The confirm keyword can be added, see ``commit-confirm``. A comment can be enter Commit-confirm ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ -The ``commit-confirm`` command commits the proposed changes to the configuration file and starts a timer. -If the ``confirm`` command is not entered before the timer expiration, the configuration will be rolled back and VyOS will reboot. +The ``commit-confirm`` command commits the proposed changes to the +configuration file and starts a timer. +If the ``confirm`` command is not entered before the timer expiration, the +configuration will be rolled back and VyOS will reboot. The default timer value is 10 minutes, but a custom value can be entered. .. code-block:: none @@ -147,7 +160,8 @@ The default timer value is 10 minutes, but a custom value can be entered. Compare ^^^^^^^ -VyOS maintains backups of previous configurations. To compare configuration revisions in configuration mode, use the compare command: +VyOS maintains backups of previous configurations. To compare configuration +revisions in configuration mode, use the compare command: .. code-block:: none @@ -176,7 +190,7 @@ Copy The ``copy`` command allows you to copy a configuration object. -Copy the configuration entrys from a firewall name WAN rule 1 to rule 2. +Copy the configuration entries from a firewall name WAN rule 1 to rule 2. .. code-block:: none @@ -208,9 +222,9 @@ Copy the configuration entrys from a firewall name WAN rule 1 to rule 2. Delete ^^^^^^ -The ``delte`` command is to delete a configuration entry. +The ``delete`` command is to delete a configuration entry. -This Example delete the hole ``service tftp-server`` section. +This example deletes the whole ``service tftp-server`` section. .. code-block:: none @@ -232,8 +246,10 @@ Edit ^^^^ The ``edit`` command allows you to navigate down into the configuration tree. -To get back to an upper level, use the ``up`` command or use the ``top`` command to get back to the upper most level. -The ``[edit]`` text displays where the user is located in the configuration tree. +To get back to an upper level, use the ``up`` command or use the ``top`` +command to get back to the upper most level. +The ``[edit]`` text displays where the user is located in the configuration +tree. .. code-block:: none @@ -246,10 +262,17 @@ The ``[edit]`` text displays where the user is located in the configuration tree Exit ^^^^ -The ``exit`` command exits the current configuration mode. If the current configuration level isn't the top-most, then the configuration level is put back to the top-most level. -If the configuration level is at the top-most level, then it exits the configuration mode and returns to operational mode. -The ``exit`` command cannot be used if uncommitted changes exists in the configuration file. To exit with uncommitted changes, you either need to use the ``exit discard`` command or you need to commit the changes before exiting. -The ``exit`` command doesn't save the configuration, only the ``save`` command does. A warning will be given when exiting with unsaved changes. Using the ``exit`` command in operational mode will logout the session. +The ``exit`` command exits the current configuration mode. If the current +configuration level isn't the top-most, then the configuration level is put +back to the top-most level. +If the configuration level is at the top-most level, then it exits the +configuration mode and returns to operational mode. +The ``exit`` command cannot be used if uncommitted changes exists in the +configuration file. To exit with uncommitted changes, you either need to use +the ``exit discard`` command or you need to commit the changes before exiting. +The ``exit`` command doesn't save the configuration, only the ``save`` command +does. A warning will be given when exiting with unsaved changes. Using the +``exit`` command in operational mode will logout the session. Exiting from a configuration level: @@ -302,7 +325,8 @@ Warning message when exiting with unsaved changes: Load ^^^^ -The ``load`` command load a configuration from a local or remote file. You have to be use ``commit`` to make the change active +The ``load`` command loads a configuration from a local or remote file. You have +to use ``commit`` to make the changes active .. code-block:: none @@ -344,9 +368,11 @@ Copies the content of a public key to the ~/.ssh/authorized_keys file. Merge ^^^^^ -The ``merge`` command merge the config from a local or remote file with the running config. +The ``merge`` command merges the config from a local or remote file with the +running config. -In the example below exist a ``default-firewall.config`` file with some common firewall rules you saved earlier. +In the below example exists a ``default-firewall.config`` file with some common +firewall rules you saved earlier. .. code-block:: none @@ -390,7 +416,7 @@ Rename The ``rename`` command allows you to rename or move a configuration object. -See here how to move the configuration entrys from vlanid 3 to 2 +See here how to move the configuration entries from vlanid 3 to 2 .. code-block:: none @@ -424,7 +450,8 @@ See here how to move the configuration entrys from vlanid 3 to 2 Rollback ^^^^^^^^ -You can ``rollback`` configuration using the rollback command, however this command will currently trigger a system reboot. +You can ``rollback`` configuration using the rollback command, however this +command will currently trigger a system reboot. Use the compare command to verify the configuration you want to rollback to. .. code-block:: none @@ -445,7 +472,8 @@ Use the compare command to verify the configuration you want to rollback to. Run ^^^ -The ``run`` command allows you to execute any operational mode commands without exiting the configuration session. +The ``run`` command allows you to execute any operational mode commands without +exiting the configuration session. .. code-block:: none @@ -460,7 +488,9 @@ The ``run`` command allows you to execute any operational mode commands without Save ^^^^ -The ``save`` command saves the current configuration to non-volatile storage. VyOS also supports saving and loading configuration remotely using SCP, FTP, or TFTP. +The ``save`` command saves the current configuration to non-volatile storage. +VyOS also supports saving and loading configuration remotely using SCP, FTP, or +TFTP. .. code-block:: none @@ -474,7 +504,7 @@ The ``save`` command saves the current configuration to non-volatile storage. Vy Set ^^^ -The ``set`` command create all configuration entrys +The ``set`` command creates all configuration entries .. code-block:: none @@ -484,9 +514,11 @@ The ``set`` command create all configuration entrys Show ^^^^ -The ``show`` command in the configuration mode displays the configuration and show uncommitted changes. +The ``show`` command in the configuration mode displays the configuration and +show uncommitted changes. -Show the hole config, the address and description of eth1 is moving to vlan 2 if you commit the changes. +Shows the whole config, the address and description of eth1 is moving to vlan 2 +if you commit the changes. .. code-block:: none @@ -521,4 +553,4 @@ Show the hole config, the address and description of eth1 is moving to vlan 2 if service { ssh { port 22 - ...... \ No newline at end of file + ...... diff --git a/docs/configuration/interfaces/openvpn.rst b/docs/configuration/interfaces/openvpn.rst index b2559c95..d4ef47b0 100644 --- a/docs/configuration/interfaces/openvpn.rst +++ b/docs/configuration/interfaces/openvpn.rst @@ -1,3 +1,5 @@ +:lastproofread: 2021-07-30 + .. _openvpn: ####### @@ -43,7 +45,7 @@ Site-to-site mode supports x.509 but doesn't require it and can also work with static keys, which is simpler in many cases. In this example, we'll configure a simple site-to-site OpenVPN tunnel using a 2048-bit pre-shared key. -First, one one of the systems generate the key using the operational command +First, one of the system generates the key using the operational command ``generate openvpn key ``. This will generate a key with the name provided in the `/config/auth/` directory. Once generated, you will need to copy this key to the remote router. @@ -94,7 +96,7 @@ Remote Configuration: set interfaces openvpn vtun1 local-address '10.255.1.2' set interfaces openvpn vtun1 remote-address '10.255.1.1' -The configurations above will default to using 128-bit Blowfish in CBC mode +The above configurations will by default use 128-bit Blowfish in CBC mode for encryption and SHA-1 for HMAC authentication. These are both considered weak, but a number of other encryption and hashing algorithms are available: @@ -177,7 +179,11 @@ First we need to specify the basic settings. 1194/UDP is the default. The closing on connection resets or daemon reloads. -.. note:: Using **openvpn-option -reneg-sec** can be tricky. This option is used to renegotiate data channel after n seconds. When used at both server and client, the lower value will trigger the renegotiation. If you set it to 0 on one side of the connection (to disable it), the chosen value on the other side will determine when the renegotiation will occur. +.. note:: Using **openvpn-option -reneg-sec** can be tricky. This option is + used to renegotiate data channel after n seconds. When used at both server + and client, the lower value will trigger the renegotiation. If you set it + to 0 on one side of the connection (to disable it), the chosen value on the + other side will determine when the renegotiation will occur. .. code-block:: none @@ -200,7 +206,7 @@ you keep the files in `/config/auth/openvpn` Now we need to specify the server network settings. In all cases we need to specify the subnet for client tunnel endpoints. Since we want clients to access -a specific network behind out router, we will use a push-route option for +a specific network behind our router, we will use a push-route option for installing that route on clients. .. code-block:: none @@ -236,12 +242,13 @@ OpenLDAP -------- Enterprise installations usually ship a kind of directory service which is used -to have a single password store for all employees. VyOS and OpenVPN support using -LDAP/AD as single user backend. +to have a single password store for all employees. VyOS and OpenVPN support +using LDAP/AD as single user backend. Authentication is done by using the ``openvpn-auth-ldap.so`` plugin which is -shipped with every VyOS installation. A dedicated configuration file is required. -It is best practise to store it in ``/config`` to survive image updates +shipped with every VyOS installation. A dedicated configuration file is +required. It is best practise to store it in ``/config`` to survive image +updates .. code-block:: none @@ -327,7 +334,10 @@ If you only want to check if the user account is enabled and can authenticate RequireGroup false -A complete LDAP auth OpenVPN configuration could look like the following example: +A complete LDAP auth OpenVPN configuration could look like the following +example: + +.. stop_vyoslinter .. code-block:: none @@ -357,10 +367,13 @@ A complete LDAP auth OpenVPN configuration could look like the following example } } +.. start_vyoslinter + OpenVPN Client ############## -VyOS can not only act as an OpenVPN site-to-site or Server for multiple clients. +VyOS can not only act as an OpenVPN site-to-site but also as a Server for +multiple clients. You can indeed also configure any VyOS OpenVPN interface as an OpenVPN client connecting to a VyOS OpenVPN server or any other OpenVPN server. @@ -463,6 +476,6 @@ The following commands let you reset OpenVPN. .. opcmd:: reset openvpn interface - Uset this command to reset the OpenVPN process on a specific interface. + Use this command to reset the OpenVPN process on a specific interface. diff --git a/docs/installation/migrate-from-vyatta.rst b/docs/installation/migrate-from-vyatta.rst index eba9dc59..82bf2662 100644 --- a/docs/installation/migrate-from-vyatta.rst +++ b/docs/installation/migrate-from-vyatta.rst @@ -156,9 +156,9 @@ release. Upon reboot, you should have a working installation of VyOS. You can go back to your Vyatta install using the ``set system image -default-boot`` command and selecting the your previous Vyatta Core image. +default-boot`` command and selecting your previous Vyatta Core image. .. note:: Future releases of VyOS will break the direct upgrade path from Vyatta core. Please upgrade through an intermediate VyOS version e.g. VyOS - 1.2. After this you can continue upgrading to newer releases once you bootet + 1.2. After this you can continue upgrading to newer releases once you booted into VyOS 1.2 once. -- cgit v1.2.3