From d45cf723f94e94891541d92e5655245d99cd6faf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: whyrlpool <26317568+whyrlpool@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 4 Jul 2024 14:29:20 +0100 Subject: proofread interfaces/vxlan --- docs/configuration/interfaces/vxlan.rst | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) (limited to 'docs') diff --git a/docs/configuration/interfaces/vxlan.rst b/docs/configuration/interfaces/vxlan.rst index af00fdec..39901f53 100644 --- a/docs/configuration/interfaces/vxlan.rst +++ b/docs/configuration/interfaces/vxlan.rst @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -:lastproofread: 2023-01-26 +:lastproofread: 2024-07-04 .. _vxlan-interface: @@ -103,8 +103,8 @@ Unicast .. cfgcmd:: set interfaces vxlan remote
- IPv4/IPv6 remote address of the VXLAN tunnel. Alternative to multicast, the - remote IPv4/IPv6 address can set directly. + IPv4/IPv6 remote address of the VXLAN tunnel. An alternative to multicast, + the remote IPv4/IPv6 address can be set directly. Multicast ^^^^^^^^^ @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ Multicast .. cfgcmd:: set interfaces vxlan group
- Multicast group address for VXLAN interface. VXLAN tunnels can be built + Multicast group address for the VXLAN interface. VXLAN tunnels can be built either via Multicast or via Unicast. Both IPv4 and IPv6 multicast is possible. @@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ the same broadcast domain. Let's assume PC4 on Leaf2 wants to ping PC5 on Leaf3. Instead of setting Leaf3 as our remote end manually, Leaf2 encapsulates the packet into a UDP-packet and -sends it to its designated multicast-address via Spine1. When Spine1 receives +sends it to its' designated multicast-address via Spine1. When Spine1 receives this packet it forwards it to all other leaves who has joined the same multicast-group, in this case Leaf3. When Leaf3 receives the packet it forwards it, while at the same time learning that PC4 is reachable behind Leaf2, because @@ -188,8 +188,8 @@ Example The setup is this: Leaf2 - Spine1 - Leaf3 -Spine1 is a Cisco IOS router running version 15.4, Leaf2 and Leaf3 is each a -VyOS router running 1.2. +Spine1 is a Cisco IOS router running version 15.4, Leaf2 and Leaf3 are each +VyOS routers running 1.2. This topology was built using GNS3. @@ -282,8 +282,8 @@ traffic from. set interfaces vxlan vxlan242 source-interface 'eth0' set interfaces vxlan vxlan242 vni '242' -As you can see, Leaf2 and Leaf3 configuration is almost identical. There are -lots of commands above, I'll try to into more detail below, command +As you can see, the Leaf2 and Leaf3 configurations are almost identical. There +are lots of commands above, I'll try to go into more detail below. Command descriptions are placed under the command boxes: .. code-block:: none @@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ that behavior is available using the above command. Unicast VXLAN ============= -Alternative to multicast, the remote IPv4 address of the VXLAN tunnel can be +Alternatively to multicast, the remote IPv4 address of the VXLAN tunnel can be set directly. Let's change the Multicast example from above: .. code-block:: none -- cgit v1.2.3