3 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/manpages/en/live-boot.7 b/manpages/en/live-boot.7
index 75a6ad8..6b7dfcd 100644
--- a/manpages/en/live-boot.7
+++ b/manpages/en/live-boot.7
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.TH LIVE\-BOOT 7 2012\-04\-09 3.0~a27-1 "Debian Live Project"
+.TH LIVE\-BOOT 7 2012\-05\-24 3.0~a27-1 "Debian Live Project"
 
 .SH NAME
 \fBlive\-boot\fR \- System Boot Scripts
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ In addition, there are some more boot parameters to influence the behaviour, see
 \fBlive\-boot\fR currently features the following parameters.
 .\" FIXME
 .IP "\fBaccess\fR=\fIACCESS\fR" 4
-Set the accessibility level for physically or visually impared users. ACCESS must be one of v1, v2, v3, m1, or m2. v1=lesser visual impairment, v2=moderate visual impairment, v3=blindness, m1=minor motor difficulties, m2=moderate motor difficulties.
+Set the accessibility level for physically or visually impaired users. ACCESS must be one of v1, v2, v3, m1, or m2. v1=lesser visual impairment, v2=moderate visual impairment, v3=blindness, m1=minor motor difficulties, m2=moderate motor difficulties.
 .IP "\fBconsole\fR=\fITTY,SPEED\fR" 4
 Set the default console to be used with the "live\-getty" option. Example: "console=ttyS0,115200"
 .IP "\fBdebug\fR" 4
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ correctly because it does not require networking afterwards and the system
 operates faster once booted because it does not require to contact the server
 anymore.
 .br
-Due to current limitations in busyboxs wget and DNS resolution, an URL can not contain a hostname but an IP only.
+Due to current limitations in busybox's wget and DNS resolution, an URL can not contain a hostname but an IP only.
 .br
 Not working: http://example.com/path/to/your_filesystem.squashfs
 .br
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ This parameters allows to set a custom ramdisk size (it's the '\-o size' option
 .IP "\fBswapon\fR" 4
 This parameter enables usage of local swap partitions.
 .IP "\fBpersistence\fR" 4
-live\-boot will probe devices for persistence media. These can be partitions (with the correct GPT name), filesystems (with the correct label) or image/archive files (with the correct file name). Overlays are labeled/named either "full\-ov", which will be mounted on /, or "custom\-ov", which can be completely customized (see \fIlive-persistence.conf\fR(5)); snapshots are labeled/named either "live\-sn" or "home\-sn" and will be extracted into / or /home, respectively (see \fIlive\-snapshot\fR(1) for more information). The order these are handled are: full\-ov, custom\-ov, live-sn, home-sn. Overlay image files and snapshot archive files have extensions which determines their filesystem or archive type, e.g. "custom\-ov.ext4" and "\home\-sn.squashfs".
+live\-boot will probe devices for persistence media. These can be partitions (with the correct GPT name), filesystems (with the correct label) or image/archive files (with the correct file name). Overlays are labeled/named either "full\-ov", which will be mounted on /, or "custom\-ov", which can be completely customized (see \fIlive-persistence.conf\fR(5)); snapshots are labeled/named either "live\-sn" or "home\-sn" and will be extracted into / or /home, respectively (see \fIlive\-snapshot\fR(1) for more information). The order these are handled are: full\-ov, custom\-ov, live-sn, home-sn. Overlay image files and snapshot archive files have extensions which determines their filesystem or archive type, e.g. "custom\-ov.ext4" and "home\-sn.squashfs".
 .IP "\fBpersistence\-encryption\fR=\fITYPE1\fR,\fITYPE2\fR ... \fITYPEn\fR" 4
 This option determines which types of encryption that we allow to be used when probing devices for persistence media. If "none" is in the list, we allow unencrypted media; if "luks" is in the list, we allow LUKS\-encrypted media. Whenever a device containing encrypted media is probed the user will be prompted for the passphrase. The default value is "none".
 .IP "\fBpersistence\-media\fR={\fIremovable\fR|\fIremovable\-usb\fR}" 4
diff --git a/manpages/en/live-persistence.conf.5 b/manpages/en/live-persistence.conf.5
index 96afb50..6dccd00 100644
--- a/manpages/en/live-persistence.conf.5
+++ b/manpages/en/live-persistence.conf.5
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.TH LIVE\-BOOT conf 2012\-04\-09 3.0~a27-1 "Debian Live Project"
+.TH LIVE\-BOOT conf 2012\-05\-24 3.0~a27-1 "Debian Live Project"
 
 .SH NAME
 \fBlive-persistence.conf\fR \- Configuration file for persistence media in
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ that volume's persistence is fully customizable through the
 \fBlive-persistence.conf\fR file stored on the root of its file system. Any such
 labeled volume must have such a file, or it will be ignored.
 .PP
-The format of \fBlive-persistence.conf\fR allow empty lines and lines starting
+The format of \fBlive-persistence.conf\fR allows empty lines and lines starting
 with a "#" (used for comments), both which will be ignored. A so
 called "custom mount" has the format:
 .PP
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Custom mounts defined in \fBlive-persistence.conf\fR accept the following
 options in a coma-separated list:
 .IP "\fBsource\fR=\fIPATH\fR" 4
 When given, store the persistence changes into \fIPATH\fR on the
-persistence media. \fIPATH\fR must be a relative path (w.r.t. the
+persistence media. \fIPATH\fR must be a relative path (with respect to the
 persistence media root) that cannot contain white spaces or the
 special . or .. path components, with the exception that it can be
 just . which means the persistence media root. This option is mostly
@@ -209,5 +209,5 @@ package in the Debian Bug Tracking System at
 Live mailing list at <\fIdebian-live@lists.debian.org\fR>.
 
 .SH AUTHOR
-live\.persist was written by anonym <\fIanonym@lavabit.com\fR> for the
+live\-persistence.conf was written by anonym <\fIanonym@lavabit.com\fR> for the
 Debian project.
diff --git a/manpages/en/live-snapshot.1 b/manpages/en/live-snapshot.1
index 2850a63..75c350b 100644
--- a/manpages/en/live-snapshot.1
+++ b/manpages/en/live-snapshot.1
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.TH LIVE\-BOOT 1 2012\-04\-09 3.0~a27-1 "Debian Live Project"
+.TH LIVE\-BOOT 1 2012\-05\-24 3.0~a27-1 "Debian Live Project"
 
 .SH NAME
 \fBlive\-snapshot\fR \- simple script to ease persistence usage
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ live\-snapshot is a script which can be used to build the right types of persist
 .IP "\-c, \-\-cow \fIDIRECTORY\fR" 4
 specifies the input directory to be cloned in the image file. Its default value "/live/overlay" should be right for most uses. However it could be handy to specify "/home" and type ext4 for the type to prepare an image file suited to be directly mounted by live\-boot as home.
 .IP "\-d, \-\-device \fIDEVICE\fR" 4
-sets the device where the media which the snapshot/persistence file/partition will be put. If it is not specified, a tmpfs will be used and linked to the user's desktop to move it where it is needed. If the device has no filesystem, an ext4 fs will be automatically created and labelled according to the values specified after the "\-\-output" value or with a sane default.
+sets the device where the media with the snapshot/persistence file/partition will be put. If it is not specified, a tmpfs will be used and linked to the user's desktop to move it where it is needed. If the device has no filesystem, an ext4 fs will be automatically created and labelled according to the values specified after the "\-\-output" value or with a sane default.
 .IP "\-e, \-\-exclude\-list \fIFILE\fR" 4
 a file containing a list of filenames/paths that should not be saved. This exclude list will be remebered on the target snapshot media for reuse.
 .IP "\-o, \-\-output \fIFILE\fR" 4
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Some variables can be configured via this config file (inside the live system).
 .IP "\fBlive/filesystem.module\fR" 4
 This optional file (inside the live media) contains a list of white\-space or carriage\-return\-separated file names corresponding to disk images in the "/live" directory. If this file exists, only images listed here will be merged into the root aufs, and they will be loaded in the order listed here. The first entry in this file will be the "lowest" point in the aufs, and the last file in this list will be on the "top" of the aufs, directly below /overlay.  Without this file, any images in the "/live" directory are loaded in alphanumeric order.
 .IP "\fB/etc/live\-persistence.binds\fR" 4
-This optional file (which resides in the rootfs system, not in the live media) is used as a list of directories which not need be persistent: ie. their content does not need to survive reboots when using the persistence features.
+This optional file (which resides in the rootfs system, not in the live media) is used as a list of directories which not need be persistent: i.e. their content does not need to survive reboots when using the persistence features.
 .br
 This saves expensive writes and speeds up operations on volatile data such as web caches and temporary files (like e.g. /tmp and .mozilla) which are regenerated each time. This is achieved by bind mounting each listed directory with a tmpfs on the original path.
 .IP "\fB/etc/live\-snapshot.list\fR" 4