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authorChristian Poessinger <christian@poessinger.com>2022-06-15 08:00:23 +0200
committerGitHub <noreply@github.com>2022-06-15 08:00:23 +0200
commit609a3abb3d9b60daf0bdd5e3733791d520322802 (patch)
tree9622be6fc4f60462841bf52f2e8c2c1100621004
parent59526a8adca2922f42778d7563bc0ddc32cfdda8 (diff)
parent74b24c5f5fcc02265faa8d259de1d12574b0db6a (diff)
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Merge pull request #1359 from dmbaturin/help-proofreading-1
Improve IPsec help strings
-rw-r--r--interface-definitions/vpn_ipsec.xml.in34
1 files changed, 17 insertions, 17 deletions
diff --git a/interface-definitions/vpn_ipsec.xml.in b/interface-definitions/vpn_ipsec.xml.in
index d884d6ce6..d36fbb024 100644
--- a/interface-definitions/vpn_ipsec.xml.in
+++ b/interface-definitions/vpn_ipsec.xml.in
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
</leafNode>
<tagNode name="esp-group">
<properties>
- <help>Encapsulated Security Payload (ESP) group name</help>
+ <help>Encapsulating Security Payload (ESP) group name</help>
</properties>
<children>
<leafNode name="compression">
@@ -44,10 +44,10 @@
</leafNode>
<leafNode name="lifetime">
<properties>
- <help>ESP lifetime</help>
+ <help>Security Association time to expire</help>
<valueHelp>
<format>u32:30-86400</format>
- <description>ESP lifetime in seconds</description>
+ <description>SA lifetime in seconds</description>
</valueHelp>
<constraint>
<validator name="numeric" argument="--range 30-86400"/>
@@ -57,10 +57,10 @@
</leafNode>
<leafNode name="life-bytes">
<properties>
- <help>ESP life in bytes</help>
+ <help>Security Association byte count to expire</help>
<valueHelp>
<format>u32:1024-26843545600000</format>
- <description>ESP life in bytes</description>
+ <description>SA life in bytes</description>
</valueHelp>
<constraint>
<validator name="numeric" argument="--range 1024-26843545600000"/>
@@ -69,10 +69,10 @@
</leafNode>
<leafNode name="life-packets">
<properties>
- <help>ESP life in packets</help>
+ <help>Security Association packet count to expire</help>
<valueHelp>
<format>u32:1000-26843545600000</format>
- <description>ESP life in packets</description>
+ <description>SA life in packets</description>
</valueHelp>
<constraint>
<validator name="numeric" argument="--range 1000-26843545600000"/>
@@ -308,13 +308,13 @@
</node>
<leafNode name="ikev2-reauth">
<properties>
- <help>Re-authentication of the remote peer during an IKE re-key - IKEv2 only</help>
+ <help>Re-authentication of the remote peer during an IKE re-key (IKEv2 only)</help>
<completionHelp>
<list>yes no</list>
</completionHelp>
<valueHelp>
<format>yes</format>
- <description>Enable remote host re-authentication during an IKE rekey. Currently broken due to a strongswan bug</description>
+ <description>Enable remote host re-authentication during an IKE rekey (currently broken due to a strongswan bug)</description>
</valueHelp>
<valueHelp>
<format>no</format>
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@
</leafNode>
<leafNode name="mode">
<properties>
- <help>IKEv1 phase 1 mode selection</help>
+ <help>IKEv1 phase 1 mode</help>
<completionHelp>
<list>main aggressive</list>
</completionHelp>
@@ -530,10 +530,10 @@
<children>
<leafNode name="level">
<properties>
- <help>strongSwan logging Level</help>
+ <help>Global IPsec logging Level</help>
<valueHelp>
<format>0</format>
- <description>Very basic auditing logs e.g. SA up/SA down</description>
+ <description>Very basic auditing logs (e.g., SA up/SA down)</description>
</valueHelp>
<valueHelp>
<format>1</format>
@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@
</node>
<tagNode name="profile">
<properties>
- <help>VPN IPSec profile</help>
+ <help>VPN IPsec profile</help>
</properties>
<children>
#include <include/generic-disable-node.xml.i>
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@
</node>
<node name="bind">
<properties>
- <help>DMVPN crypto configuration</help>
+ <help>DMVPN tunnel configuration</help>
</properties>
<children>
<leafNode name="tunnel">
@@ -1010,7 +1010,7 @@
</valueHelp>
<valueHelp>
<format>respond</format>
- <description>Bring the connection up only if traffic is detected</description>
+ <description>Wait for the peer to initiate the connection</description>
</valueHelp>
<valueHelp>
<format>none</format>
@@ -1090,10 +1090,10 @@
#include <include/ip-protocol.xml.i>
<leafNode name="priority">
<properties>
- <help>Priority for IPSec policy (lowest value more preferable)</help>
+ <help>Priority for IPsec policy (lowest value more preferable)</help>
<valueHelp>
<format>u32:1-100</format>
- <description>Priority for IPSec policy (lowest value more preferable)</description>
+ <description>Priority for IPsec policy (lowest value more preferable)</description>
</valueHelp>
<constraint>
<validator name="numeric" argument="--range 1-100"/>