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| author | rebortg <github@ghlr.de> | 2021-06-30 16:12:51 +0200 |
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| committer | rebortg <github@ghlr.de> | 2021-06-30 16:12:51 +0200 |
| commit | 54bd1933f98708cce7a196f236609143767cb4d3 (patch) | |
| tree | c856291d5770f04b956dcb84f6d942da206600fc | |
| parent | 3302e28cf7bea1aaaf87d49100bd5c6b1f194ff0 (diff) | |
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bonding: correct spelling and grammar
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1 files changed, 11 insertions, 9 deletions
diff --git a/docs/configuration/interfaces/bonding.rst b/docs/configuration/interfaces/bonding.rst index d19ecb59..13203d15 100644 --- a/docs/configuration/interfaces/bonding.rst +++ b/docs/configuration/interfaces/bonding.rst @@ -1,3 +1,5 @@ +:lastproofread: 2021-06-30 + .. _bond-interface: ####################### @@ -47,7 +49,7 @@ Bond options the :cfgcmd:`hash-policy` option, documented below. .. note:: Not all transmit policies may be 802.3ad compliant, particularly - in regards to the packet mis-ordering requirements of section 43.2.4 + in regards to the packet misordering requirements of section 43.2.4 of the 802.3ad standard. * ``active-backup`` - Active-backup policy: Only one slave in the bond is @@ -133,9 +135,9 @@ Bond options This option only affects 802.3ad mode. - The default value is 0. This will cause carrier to be asserted (for 802.3ad - mode) whenever there is an active aggregator, regardless of the number of - available links in that aggregator. + The default value is 0. This will cause the carrier to be asserted + (for 802.3ad mode) whenever there is an active aggregator, + regardless of the number of available links in that aggregator. .. note:: Because an aggregator cannot be active without at least one available link, setting this option to 0 or to 1 has the exact same @@ -222,7 +224,7 @@ Bond options This algorithm is not fully 802.3ad compliant. A single TCP or UDP conversation containing both fragmented and unfragmented packets will see packets striped across two interfaces. This may result in out of order - delivery. Most traffic types will not meet this criteria, as TCP rarely + delivery. Most traffic types will not meet these criteria, as TCP rarely fragments traffic, and most UDP traffic is not involved in extended conversations. Other implementations of 802.3ad may or may not tolerate this noncompliance. @@ -267,7 +269,7 @@ Bond options be given for ARP monitoring to function. The maximum number of targets that can be specified is 16. The default value - is no IP addresses. + is no IP address. Offloading ---------- @@ -498,9 +500,9 @@ Lets assume the following topology: ! .. note:: When using EVE-NG to lab this environment ensure you are using e1000 - as the desired driver for your VyOS network interfaces. When using the regular - virtio network driver no LACP PDUs will be sent by VyOS thus the port-channel - will never become active! + as the desired driver for your VyOS network interfaces. When using the + regular virtio network driver no LACP PDUs will be sent by VyOS thus the + port-channel will never become active! ********* Operation |